2007年10月27日 星期六
Busy Day
Yesterday was really a busy day. The only free time I had was the time during the morning. I went to eat lunch with my classmate in the afternoon, and after I went home, my high school's classmates call me and ask me to go to the barbershop with him. I said that I will be right there, thought I was very tired and wanna to have a sleep. At first, I thought that it would just took 20 to 30 mins, but it took two hours to wait him. It was really boring and I wanna go home as soon as possible. Finally, he had finished his hair business and I could go home. But, I was invited to a dinner party by the friends of the mingdao chorus after I went home. So I had to go out immediately. It took me another three hours to finish. I went home at about 9 o'clock after the dinner party. But, I started to feel hungry after two hours, so I had to ask my friends to eat the 2nd dinner, thoug I wanted to sleep very much. At last, I got home at 12 o'clock and wanted to type this blog, and it is time to go to sleep now. Bye~!
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Hello, this is Vicky. There is a error in the article.
"it would just take 20 to 30 mins"
You use a wrong verb form after the helping verbs.
http://daer2007fall.wikispaces.com/local+errors
Thanks for sharing your opinion. But I found a mistake in your opinion, too. I think you should say " You used a wrong verb form after the helping verbs." It is because that I wrote this article in the past. So you should use past pattern to describe my action. This is the web site of this rule.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/601/01/
Hello, pie. I am Tracy. There are some errors in your article. First, "my high school's classmates call me and ask me to go to the barbershop with him." Because this thing had already happened, I think you should use past tense. "my high school's classmates called me and asked me to go to the barbershop with him."
[http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/601/01/] Second, I found an informal word in the following sentence."thought I was very tired and wanna to have a sleep." You might have to write "want to" rather than "wanna", because "wanna" is a dialect.
[http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/wanna]
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