2007年11月7日 星期三

Relay Race

This evening, I went to attend the relay race of the school. Well, it was really a unforgetable experience. In the past, my friends always think me that I won't exercise anymore. But, I agreed to join the relay race team of our department because that men are indanger creature in my department. So I was forced to join the relay race team. But, it was very fun. When I watched the game of our department's girls, I discover that all of the girls were good at racing. I was shocked and I think that all of them were faster than me. Never mind. I am not a sport man but a music man. Then, it was time of men's game. I was really exciting. And I also tried my best to race. I was really hard working. But, after the game all my classmates said that I was elegant when I was running. I was shocked, again. I am a man, right? Why all of you say that to me. I was so sad. But, I think I was really brilliant that I ccould be elegant when I was running. It was difficult to do, right? And I won't forget this experience in the future.

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Hi Hen-da,

I can see you were very angry when you used "you", instead of "they". To use "you" sounds like pointing to the reader. It sounds like yelling at the reader.

"Ellegent" is a good word. It is not arrogant. Don't be so serious.

Joni Chao